Sunday, January 20, 2013

I Came Back for You


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She was waiting for him, he knew
His Maggie...her fingers now frail with age
She had always liked the park
He had known just where to find her
Soon they would fly together
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 This was written for the Trifextra Challenge for this weekend :)


And now, on to our Trifextra.  We want you to choose one of the pictures below and give us a 33-word response to it.  Your responses will be judged by the community this weekend.  If you use the photo on your blog, you must include the attached accreditation (with active links).  
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23 comments:

  1. Sandra CrookJanuary 20, 2013 at 3:53 AM

    Aww, nice one. Very sad.

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    1. Dawn :)January 20, 2013 at 8:43 PM

      Yeaaah, but they'll be together again soon :)

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  2. kymmJanuary 20, 2013 at 7:34 AM

    You never know where you'll find kinship!

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  3. AnonymousJanuary 20, 2013 at 10:20 AM

    Ah! Lovely!

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  4. DraugJanuary 20, 2013 at 11:55 AM

    This is so sad!!! ;__; But so good too!

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    1. Dawn :)January 20, 2013 at 8:45 PM

      Yeah, is sad to be parted... good to be reunited :) Thank you!

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  5. PattiKenJanuary 20, 2013 at 11:58 AM

    Aw, this is so sad...

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    1. Dawn :)January 20, 2013 at 8:46 PM

      Aw, don't worry - it has a good ending on the other side of 33 words ;)

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  6. StephJanuary 20, 2013 at 1:44 PM

    I love it. Poignant.. a life wrapped up in 33 words.

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  7. BoJanuary 20, 2013 at 2:03 PM

    awee. Such a sweet love.

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  8. AtreyeeJanuary 20, 2013 at 2:17 PM

    Oh,this is so sweet though sad-it is a fact that pigeons never forget a face-so he knew his Maggie & found her-lovely last line-eternal bonding:-)

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    1. Dawn :)January 20, 2013 at 8:47 PM

      I didn't know that! Even better - thank you! :)

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  9. RachaelJanuary 20, 2013 at 5:46 PM

    Sad but sweet poem.

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    1. Dawn :)January 20, 2013 at 8:47 PM

      Yeah, that's what I was going for. Thank you :D

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  10. AnonymousJanuary 20, 2013 at 6:58 PM

    very sweet, indeed

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  11. Thomas Charles MacInnesJanuary 20, 2013 at 7:07 PM

    Simply beautiful. Good work.

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  12. TrifectaJanuary 20, 2013 at 9:33 PM

    Definitely sad, but also a little creepy. Or is that just me? Thanks so much for linking up.

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  13. AnonymousJanuary 20, 2013 at 9:52 PM

    I thought this was sweet. Sad that they have been apart, but nice to be reunited.

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