The heavy burden slid from her shoulders.
New truths arose in its place light as feathers,
Touched gold by the breaking Dawn...
Her own book revealed itself in the world of her eyes.
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This was written for the Trifextra Challenge for this weekend :)
This weekend we're asking for 33 words about a new beginning.
Beautiful!To finally see one's own work must make one feel light hearted & that's a truth:-)Loved the lines, "...light as feathers,Touched gold by the breaking Dawn."
ReplyDeleteYes, it's true! :D Thank you :)
DeleteThe burden that is another's book, and how light your own is. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteYes, that's it exactly - thanks kymm :D
DeleteThis is so poetic. I loved it!
ReplyDeleteThanks! :)
DeleteHow exciting. You captured the feelings beautifully.
ReplyDelete*beam*
DeleteThis is a beautiful take on the prompt, and wonderfully written. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks - it's a literal New Beginning flow in from the previous entry!
DeleteThis is so uplifting (:
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful (and the photo a perfect companion.)
ReplyDeleteah, I can feel it too! :)
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