Thursday, January 17, 2013

The Seekers



She blew on a dandelion, and changed her world

The seeds danced on the breeze, bearers of wish and a prayer

Given freedom with her breath, they searched

Their idle time was over

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This was written for the Trifecta Challenge of the week :)

 
IDLE
1: lacking worth or basis : vain
2: not occupied or employed: as
    a : having no employment : inactive
    b : not turned to normal or appropriate use
    c : not scheduled to compete
3: a : shiftless, lazy


Please remember:
  • Your response must be between 33 and 333 words.
  • You must use the 3rd definition of the given word in your post.
  • The word itself needs to be included in your response.
  • You may not use a variation of the word; it needs to be exactly as stated above. 
  • Only one entry per writer.
  • Trifecta is open to everyone.  Please join us.

5 comments:

  1. Hi there,

    I admit it; poetry scares me. But I liked this and enjoyed the elegant simplicity (no punctuation, very cool) of it very much. Not to mention the word choice. I read it out loud a couple of times!

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