Sunday, January 20, 2013

I Came Back for You


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She was waiting for him, he knew
His Maggie...her fingers now frail with age
She had always liked the park
He had known just where to find her
Soon they would fly together
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This was written for the Trifextra Challenge for this weekend :)


And now, on to our Trifextra.  We want you to choose one of the pictures below and give us a 33-word response to it.  Your responses will be judged by the community this weekend.  If you use the photo on your blog, you must include the attached accreditation (with active links).  

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    1. Yeaaah, but they'll be together again soon :)

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  2. You never know where you'll find kinship!

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  3. This is so sad!!! ;__; But so good too!

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    1. Yeah, is sad to be parted... good to be reunited :) Thank you!

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    1. Aw, don't worry - it has a good ending on the other side of 33 words ;)

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  5. I love it. Poignant.. a life wrapped up in 33 words.

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  6. Oh,this is so sweet though sad-it is a fact that pigeons never forget a face-so he knew his Maggie & found her-lovely last line-eternal bonding:-)

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    1. I didn't know that! Even better - thank you! :)

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    1. Yeah, that's what I was going for. Thank you :D

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  8. Definitely sad, but also a little creepy. Or is that just me? Thanks so much for linking up.

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  9. I thought this was sweet. Sad that they have been apart, but nice to be reunited.

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